Hi H.,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who has created a vivid fantasy world to cope with the harshness of his life. I am hoping that the speaker will find a way to cope with life's difficulties other than fantasizing. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.