Hi Bodhisattwa Parekh ;

Welcome to Writing.com. I'm 💙 Carly - February is here! and I found your review using the read and review button on the side panel of the site.

Overall, I found your story heartwarming in its charm.

Suggestions:
I would be inclined to add in more spacing to give your piece more white space. Readers are more inclined to read your work if it is spaced out. Packed in dense like it is makes it a challenge to read... especially when I am tired.

Spacing would also allow the reader to breath into your piece.

I like the ending. Well done. Thank you for sharing.

Keep writing.

Another suggestion and this is pure opinion on my part, I would not say a group of rapists. It could be one rapist, but then I don't see rapists going to the trouble of breaking in to someone's house to rape them. I would be inclined to say a group of burglars with nefarious intentions... but it can be as simple as a burglar.

The fact that they cat protected her from invading bad guys works for me.

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