Greetingsmy valued acquaintance!

I very much hope this encounters you Mr. County healthy and prosperous. I came upon your piece "The Dark Side, #1077117". The content truly resonated with me, igniting my interest for the new, fresh, weird kind of stuff. I thoroughly enjoyed the reading, being my first exposure to your stuff and sincerely hope you find my feedback both useful and heartfelt.

Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
         Being from gen-X, I can totally relate from the get-go. I found the concept hilarious, as well as it may be too smart for it's own good.

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter (as applicable):
         By the second line, I just had the image of the piece being for stand-up. Then I found a reasonable supposition was simply, "It's not a poem, so, flow along with the drift of the idea. Boom done!"

Artistic Voice and Imagery:
         Concise, clear and to the point!

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
I have no business being here!

Suggestions:

         Keep it up!! I will keep and eye out for sure!

Nothing relevant to say, adieu!

SKÖL!!

Hrafnar Árgeir

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .