Hi tamzanite,


This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion about your view point on bad writing. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have reviewed the book The Wandering Inn. The reader is delighted with the look they get at your preferences in novels. I am not sure I will be trying out this book. It sounds tedious. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.