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 I Love You, Because Open in new Window. [E]
A poem - "Your..beauty..Came to greet my..soul/With a glistening enchantment"
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Tim!

I found this by using the Random Read and Review Button for my daily review.

Another beautiful poem, this one showcasing a special relationship in your life. I really appreciate your charming ways with words. This poem is nice because it almost feels like a spiritual meaning, as if you're speaking about your relationship with God and how He rescued you from your past.

I see the genres are Romance and Relationship,so I assume you're speaking either as a narrator or about your own personal significant other. Either way, the lofty heights of your appreciation for them and the way they came to your side and never left is well expressed.

We see how you view the loving relationship as a metaphor and example of the enduring love of a Higher Power. This depth of emotion is touching and heartwarming.

As usual, I don't have anything to suggest here. Your verses flow conversationally, and the lack of rhyme aids the reading and avoids a sense of "Hallmark Valentine's day card" triteness.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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