Hi yojina,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, you emphasize the beauty in imperfections. Our quirks and unique characteristics make us stand out as people. We should not fret about minor imperfections in ourselves and others. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.