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 The Mermaid and the Genie. Open in new Window. [13+]
A Mermaid finds a Lamp with a Genie inside it.
by Lee Mission Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A mermaid swims through the ocean, checking out shipwrecks and the like for treasures. She soon comes across a lamp. Taking it home, she ends up rubbing it, and a genie comes out. When asked what she wishes for, the mermaid has to think for a bit. However, she soon makes her wishes, which has consequences she wasn't expecting.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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