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 Literary Analysis of Semitic Scripture  Open in new Window. [E]
a summary of the Christian faith
by George A. Hopkins Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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The first things I would bring to your attention are formatting issues. I always recommend Size 4 Verdana font for an open and engaging reading experience across devices, and this item comes across as dense and difficult to read even though it is fairly brief and well written. Also, on this site it’s nicer to have more paragraph breaks; I see you have a mere three paragraphs here, and it creates a blocky appearance which adds to the feeling of “is this worth reading?”

But perhaps you have only posted this as some sort of college writing assignment, judging by the header you’ve included. I would point out that the title of the item seems to imply a much longer and more in-depth study than what we have here. Perhaps a word count in the subtitle would be a good idea to help us know what we’re getting into.

As for the statements themselves, I find them to be fairly accurate, describing the basics of the Judeo-Christian faith and launching into a discussion of the opening lines of Genesis and how they relate to the overarching theme of Scripture. As one who has spent many years studying the three major monotheistic religions, I have come to the unsatisfactory feeling that none of them have it exactly right, but perhaps the Christian worldview is the most well-rounded and thoughtful in the concept of human rights and freedoms and the equality and dignity of all people.

I respect your studies and applaud your efforts. This was an interesting read. I don’t often come across nonfiction items here.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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