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 The Spring Discovers Summer Open in new Window. [E]
"...sunny skies, warmer temps, and traffic, less of a bummer..."
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Tim!

Always a joy to find one of your poems on the Random Read and Review button.

This one is somewhat frivolous: lighthearted yet realistic, observing life's difficulties yet with a buoyant optimism as it sees summer approaching.

I'm not too much of a summer person myself; having lived in a warm state now for about five years or so, I'm sick of heat and humidity and would desperately like to see a change of seasons. Or so I would think... One has a tendency to romanticize whatever one is not currently experiencing, you know? If I went up north again and experienced a bitterly cold day with snow I probably wouldn't like it as much as I thought I would *Laugh*

As usual, I have nothing to suggest here with your poetry. It's well written, charming, with rhyme and meter and playful care, expressing a certain joy in life and an appreciation for all it has to offer, both tough days and fun times.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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