Hello, Sumojo!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

You did a fantastic job with the Blogging Circle of Friends prompt for today!

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

Wow, what an enterprising young lady your granddaughter is! Good for her! That trip to Italy sounds fantastic and I love that she herself earned the money to go! I hope she enjoys the trip and the concert when she gets back.

You can always be young at heart. I think you are.

I wondered if a casual employee where you are is similar to a part-time employee here in the United States of America? Usually, here, only full-time employees get benefits, sick leave or vacation time. And part timers tend to be paid less. Though that's not always the case. Companies save a lot of money with part timers, but sadly, some people have to work three (or more!) part time jobs just to get by. One of my friends had one employer "give" her 39 hours a week, just to keep her part time (it takes 40 to be full time in that company) and not have to pay her the higher full-time wage or give her benefits. I hope things are nicer in your country towards part timers.

Congratulations to your daughter on moving into her dream home! What a great blessing! Glad it has room for a piano too! I hope that means she plays it already? Or has access to lessons to learn to play it?

It must be so nice to have your own home almost back to normal. I can't imagine having two extra people living with me for four months. You love her though. We do often make sacrifices for those who we love.

Bummer about the traffic violation. I don't imagine that will make her day. How does that work in your country? I think that here if you get it in the mail then you can either pay it and be done, or go to court to contest it. If a police officer stops you and gives you a ticket, I have no idea? Maybe the ticket has a place you can pay. We once got stopped for having a headlight out. We had to get it fixed and then bring the receipt to the police station. A police officer actually came out and made us test the headlights to make sure it was really done. But then he signed off on it. There wasn't a fee because we got it done right away, but if we had waited more than a month (I think? Been a while... could have been two weeks or some other time frame), then we would have had a fine too.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your Blogging Circle of Friends blog post.

I thought the personal genre you selected was perfect for this blog post (and overall blog) of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

Your posts sometimes make me wonder about the differences in our countries. I've always wanted to visit where you live now. It looks like an amazing place and our virtual tour of the world's stays there were amazing.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your blog post, and cheered for your granddaughter and daughter, and empathized with you for what you went through.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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