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 The Shepard Open in new Window. [E]
A Shepard who seeks pleasure in the rain, while his sheep wander around.
by Ambience24 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A shepherd out watching their sheep begins to daydream. He wonders about things, about his desires and more. Then, he decides to have some fun. However, when he comes to his senses, he soon learns an important lesson - always know where the sheep are, or you might lose them.

Thoughts and Characters
An interesting piece to read with an interesting character.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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