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snarling cup of coffee birthday gift  [E]
best birthday gift ever a year's supply of Peet's coffee
by JCosmos
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings,

What an amusing and delightful way to honor your favorite coffee, by writing a poem within a story. I stand amused at everyone’s fascination with the brown stuff, being one who avoids caffeine and alcohol myself. I read your rollicking chain of words with a smile as I pictured this over the top cup of Joe your character so appreciates. I love the large font you’ve chosen. Formatting is great, and you’ve selected all three genres.

I don’t have any suggestions here; you’ve done well in expressing your unique perspective and writing style.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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