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The Dormouse Poem Open in new Window. [E]
A poem in praise of rodent bards.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Beholden!

I stumbled across this using the Random Read and Review button. I’m glad to find something from your past participation in the Alice in Wonderland activity, and I see you struggled with the acrostic poem to some extent (such as to tell us never to request such a feat from your pen again *Laugh*)
I must say, however, that you did an excellent job here of creating something with a rollicking meter and a jolly good theme, suitable for the required words it is built out of and of course great for the nonsensical Alice activity. You carry us along convincingly, sharing thoughts about the writing abilities of rodents and accidentally of cows as well… You even chose a perfectly adorable cover image. Who could resist paying attention to the wise words of such an endearing rodent?

It’s always fun to see what earlier prompts required. I have nothing to suggest here, of course; just stopping by to let you know I enjoyed reading it and applaud your efforts.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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