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 Longing Open in new Window. [E]
298 words, a narrative on never quite fitting in
by rainyplot336 Author Icon
Review of Longing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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We all long for something as we look out past the stars. There is that part of us that wonders what happens when the Sun rises, causing them to just vanish. Granted, most of us know that the stars are still there, but the light of the Sun outshines them. However, there will always be that part that just looks up, and wonders.

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An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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