Hello, Hoovsie!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I finally had time to read this noble bull story of yours and greatly enjoyed it!

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I saw this award-winning story of yours sometime in the past and knew I would enjoy it, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "September" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

Wow, what a fun and creative story! Like Megan, I love how you love cows!

I can't believe you got some of your worst reviews on this story. No wonder the bad mouthers are gone. They don't know a good thing when they see it.

My favorite line was: "I snorted in a fine, noble, and inspiring way." It made me smile.

I thought you were smart to include some post notes about Hemmingway. Sadly, I suspect that many college graduates haven't read anything by the fine writer.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your noble bull story.

I thought the comedy, steampunk, and philosophy genres you selected were perfect for this noble bull story of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your noble bull story, and empathized with you for what you went through with the (insane) nasty reviews. Hopefully the five stars you earned with this review will make you smile. Even more, I hope it's enough to bump the story's average review from 4.5 stars to 5.0 stars. That'd be just lovely, in my opinion.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, love of cows, knowledge, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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