Hello, Sumojo!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

Since joining Blogging Circle of Friends and Blog City, I read your blog regularly, and enjoy it, and have grown to appreciate you even more.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

Wow, you have a lot of great ideas to improve the world right from your own home. I wish everyone would implement your ideas! Thankfully, I do most of them already.

Your blog post reminded me to check on my elderly neighbors. I remember when there's a big storm or event but could definitely check on them more often. Especially the widowed ladies who are all alone.

I liked that you acknowledged how overwhelming it could be to think about saving the whole world, then broke it down to reasonable activities that most people could manage. At the very least, the world would be better "if we [each] managed our own mess."

My favorite lines were: "The problems such as climate change, world starvation and disease are surely too complex for one person’s actions make a difference.
But what if we start by looking closer to home, perhaps starting with our own family structures?" Though your whole blog post was good and I hope more people read it.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your blog post.

I thought the Personal, Arts, and Community genres you selected were perfect for this overall blog of yours.

I like the dog photo you have for your blog's thumbnail picture.

I already forgot the results for the Blog Week Birthday Bastion 2024. I hope you placed as a winner! This post is great. I had intended to enter but when I reviewed all that I intended to do, realized it wasn't going to happen. I heard there were still at least twenty five people who did enter, and you were one of them, so I'm really glad for the host of the contest. It is always nice when one hosts if people actually enter.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

The only thing I can think of would be to add what items from your list that you're doing so your role model example could shine even more.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your blog post, and applaud you for your great ideas.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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