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Review #4775961
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 Are You A Procrastinator? Open in new Window. [E]
Or, are you just forgetting things?
by JACE Author Icon
Review by Cubby Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, JACE! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2024" Open in new Window. and your entry came before mine. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* I'm so glad you shared this, especially right before my own entry. It's so nice to know others are going through the same ordeals! *Laugh* Although I'm not at the 70 mark yet, it's not too far away (1 1/2 years) but my hubby will be 70 in December. HOW DID THAT HAPPEN??? *Shock2*

         *Bulletg* My favorite part was: (regarding walking into another room and forgetting what it was you were going to do)

Science apparently can explain that phenomenon. You leave familiar surroundings and go into a room with new surroundings thus wiping your mind clear of the old surroundings, including the reason for you to move in the first place. That explains why when you return to your original spot, you can remember why you moved.

         *Bulletp* I can certainly connect to this piece! The mind just isn't as quick as it used to me.

         *Bulletb* Nice work, Jace!


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         Paragraph 1: and there’s now rhyme or reason *Right* and there’s no rhyme or reason


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         Again, nicely done. Thanks for writing this!

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Have a great day and...*Quill*
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