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Dear Me  Open in new Window. [E]
Something For Me, By Me in 2022, All About ME
by ♥noVember tHiNg♥ Author Icon
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE ESSAY

This is a motivational essay that sets the tone for author's goals in 2022.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the ending. HOOves was picking herself up by the cow hooves and plowing into 2022.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is written in the first person. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

*Star* GOAL SETTING

There's an assessment of 2021, which seemed like a tough year. I think it was for all of us. The goal for 2022 was wise up and be "me". It sounds easy, but I also know it's easy to get side tracked. I got the impression that 2022 was a recovery year from 2021.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easy on the eyes to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader using a conversational voice. The ending leaves the reader on an upbeat tone and reminds us all of something important. "Ya gotta be you."

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