Hi Moxxy,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with confusion and tension. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone questioning who they are as a person. We all have experienced this in our lives. I read to the last word to see if the speaker finds the answers they seek about themselves. I loved this poem. The free verse works very well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.