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You have a young man, easily ten years of age, who desires to become a metal-rock star, like a lot of his favorite bands. He gets guitar lessons and more. Then, he gets tickets, which let him go on a tour, following these bands around the world. Will he be able to follow his dream, and achieve greatness? Only time will tell.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling and grammar looks alright, but you might want to double-check, as you have some spacing issues.

Suggestions
Might be a good idea to -

1. Have some space between paragraphs to make reading easier.

2. Break this up into 2-3 items, which, again, would make reading easier.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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