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 The One Who Stayed Open in new Window. [13+]
Entry for the Writer's Cramp, ending 6/26
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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A man tries to work at a technology company. There's a number of delays, and a whole lot of trouble, like clients threatening to cut the funding. Then, several team members walk away from the project. Will they be able to solve their issues, and get the project out in time to salvage things? Read to find out.

Characters
Characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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