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Aunt Catherine's Blanket Open in new Window. [E]
Seamstress Magic
by ♥noVember tHiNg♥ Author Icon
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A fond remembrance of the poet's aunt.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the story the poem told. I felt like I got to know Aunt Catherine a little bit, too.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There is no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easy on the eyes to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Using her magic blanket as a shield, so the cats never saw her fear" There's a lot of implied emotion here. A person is hiding behind a blanket, masking a fear (of cats) It's like the blanket gives strength and courage and that's what make it magical.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening draws the reader in leaving them wondering why she's looking in a button box, but not for a button. The title fits the poem well. There's a lot of heartfelt emotion and warmth in the poem. Well done.

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