Hello, NeenahDee!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed your beautiful, dreamy love poem.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month and day! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review (re-MOO) uplifting.

Wow, what lovely poem. It felt like a little breath of fresh, romantic air.

I liked that the soft pastel colors went along nicely with the light and lovely feel of your poem.

My favorite line was: "For all time there's you and me." Well said. I think that and the whole last stanza was a great way to wrap up this romantic poem of yours.

I liked your consistent rhyming throughout this romantic poem of yours.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your romantic poem.

I thought the Romance/Love, Relationship, and Women's genres that you selected were well suited for this dream wind poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

The only thing I have to suggest doesn't have anything to do with your writing. It's more about visibility / readability. It'd be to either bold your whole poem or make it a larger font size so it's easier for our older and visually impaired members to see and read. The light colors are beautiful, but they are harder to see.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your romantic poem. It brightened my day. Thank you!

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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