Hello, F. G. King!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I read your poem and enjoyed it.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review (re-MOO) uplifting.

I thought this was a lovely, thought-provoking poem about wisdom.

I liked the test you conveyed in the last two lines.

My favorite line was: "One and all of them in disguise" Well said. Most of us wear masks of some form in this life.

It's true that it does no good to think "one is wiser than the rest."

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your poem about wisdom.

I thought the Opinion, Philosophy, and Emotional genres you selected were perfect for this blog post (and overall blog) of yours.

I did wonder if this was a specific form poem and whether you entered it in a contest. If so, it'd be nice if you included that information somewhere. Good luck if you did enter it in a contest.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your poem about wisdom.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, thoughts, philosophy, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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