The Long & Winding Moo [13+] Introduction to Me & My Portfolio |
My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE MEMOIR A young tHiNg finds Writing.com early in the 2000's and makes friends while building community. WHAT I LIKED Great character voice. It's very conversational and draws you right in. POV NARRATION/TENSE This is told in the first person by tHiNg. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately. THEME For me, I picked out the theme of life on WDC and how fun it can be. ♥Ho Ho HOOves♥ has been a busy bee here on WDC from writing, reading, product reviews, and creating merit badges. EMOTIONAL BEATS I could tell how much tHiNg enjoyed being a member of the community. ((((hugs))) for sharing that mott had passed away. tHiNg may be a hand, but she's very sweet and human. Thoughts and prayers are with you. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Great use of WDC ML to highlight your WDC memoir. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening draws the reader right in. when tHiNg isn't tHiNg, hOOves is running lose on the website, sharing her cowisdoms with the community. The writing here is candid, honest, and sincere. tHiNg is such a wonderful member here on WDC. I'm glad to know her and highly recommend people check out her port! HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" An Angel Army Review
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