How Pumpkin Spice Came to Be [E] The discovery of Pumpkin Spice and everything autumnally nice. |
HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Greetings, tj-turkey-jobble-jobble-hard-J! I am reviewing this because I am part of the Anniversary Review Team, and this is your anniversary month! BTW, where have you been??? It's not the same without you! First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked I really thought this was true till I read that note at the end! This story is fictional, I make no claims to the origins of Pumpkin Spice. What a fun story though! Thanksgiving at a cabin heated with firewood, and pumpkin pie for dessert! Yum! Mixing the pie filling in the coffee decanter was a brilliant idea. And then the leftover mix, gone unnoticed, getting mixed with the coffee was also brilliant! Have you actually tried this? Just curious. I enjoyed this little story very much! My favorite was: “It tastes like autumn,” I replied. Love it! Suggestions/Comments to Consider Paragraph 10: she called me an asked if she called me and asked if an = and Final Thoughts Excellent (and believable!) writing! Again, Happy WDC Account Anniversary! And you'd better be coming back soon, ya hear??? A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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