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 Forgiveness Is The Answer Open in new Window. [E]
We tend to embrace the reason for war. A bullet doesn't reason, it delivers a result. Hate
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Review by Monty Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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There is a great message in this write and rhyming end words are great in the first two stanzas especially. I lost the rhythm in the next two stanzas which might just me but I did read it over again aloud but could not pick up rhythm which I always look for in poetry of this theme. It is well titled which brought me into reading this poem. Thank you for sharing.
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