Hello, Dad / jman17724!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

What a lovely birth announcement in limerick form!

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review (re-MOO) uplifting.

I'm glad I mentioned to you that I'd like to read more of your birth announcement limerick poems, if you had any, when I did your last review and that you took me up on it and shared the link to this lovely poem that you wrote two years later.

Congratulations on the birth of your cute granddaughter! I know it was back in 2017, but I'm just reading it now. I think that means that she's seven years now now! Wild how time flies! I'm sure she's even cuter and you're even more proud though.

My favorite line was: "She's as cute as she oughter." I thought that was adorable and fitting for a limerick poem.

I was glad that your daughter in law survived the labor and delivery of this precious new member of your family.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your birth announcement in limerick form.

I thought the comedy, family, and children's genres you selected were perfect for this limerick birth announcement of yours. Actually, children's is a better selection than what I recommended yesterday for your grandson's limerick birth announcement. Anything's better than "other" though ... except nothing. Some people don't pick all three genres, but you did, and that's good.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!

The poem is great. The improvement I would recommend would be to add a bit more information before or after it. For example, I would have loved to have known your granddaughter's name and a bit more information, like you shared with her older brother's announcement.



CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your limerick poem / birth announcement for your granddaughter and wish her every blessing in life.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, family news, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you and your family!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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