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Puddles Open in new Window. [E]
Puddles, Puddles, More Puddles
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Espero!

What a lovely poem about a lonely, dreary day at home. Sometimes those days are my favorite, but after a couple they can make me stir crazy. I like how you captured both of those aspects, talking about peacefulness within cuddling up with our pets and watching the storming and birds outside, but also reflecting on the loneliness and sadness these days can cause as well. Great job.

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Your poem moved along at a wonderful pace and held a lot of emotions. I could feel the sense of contentment but also the wish for a sunny day in your words. I could envision the cat cuddling up with you and the rain outside. Perfect weather to get a good book! *Cool*

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I noticed no real grammatical issues. There were a few lines you could add commas at the end of to match the rest of the poem, but other than that you wrote flawlessly.

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Overall, I loved this little poem and it made me crazy a cup of coffee and a big blanket. It has been HOT here, I can’t wait until we have nice cool rainy days again. But, of course, in moderation. *Laugh* I enjoyed the flow and rhymes you used in this piece as well, great job!

Thanks for sharing!


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