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 Confidence. Open in new Window. [E]
|| Love yourself, for all you're worth.
by dyxe0ri Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

A simple yet profound poem, with a conversational flow and an inspirational theme. I enjoyed reading it. You have formatted it well, with double spacing. I would recommend adding a third relevant genre such as "Inspirational" or "Philosophy" or "Psychological" or "Experience." This would make it easier to find when browsing and also help qualify for as many Quill Award nominations as possible.

The triteness of the theme is a bit of a challenge... Perhaps you could make it darker and more realistic by adding more of specific details about a personal struggle or an experience where you confidently stood up to what was happening. But now I'm moving into the type of things I might say if it was a story rather than a poem.

The bouncy optimism of the certainty of confidence showing up if you just "fake it till you make it" reminds me of the Imagine Dragons song Symphony... I hope you don't mind my mentioning that. I'm a huge music person. This could easily be a song, with the repetition and the poppy outlook.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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