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 Illuminating the unknown Open in new Window. [E]
Exploring how darkness reveals both past memories and future possibilities, guiding growth
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What an interesting and enlightening personal account, comparing the darkness within yourself to the darkness out in the vast universe. We see the lesson learned here of taking solace in the balance of wisdom one can find in this dualistic darkness.

I love this because I am a very dualistic person in many ways; almost everything about me and my life is composed of impossible opposites which I spend my days reconciling somehow. The theme of drawing good from the inner and the outer and gaining strength from the dark is powerful and well put.

Your words read like a brief prose poem, sharing a meaningful experience with us in a direct and simple and heartfelt way. I don't have anything to suggest here except to add two more relevant genres such as "Dark," "Philosophy" "Experience" or "Psychology." This would help people find it when browsing and also help with Quill Award nominations.

I think this would look great if you wrote it out by hand in a nice script (or even just printed it up nicely on a Doc or an image - I love digital font art...) And hung it on your wall or posted it on a noteboard as a daily reminder.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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