Hi Kåre เลียม Enga ;

I hit the read and review button on the side of the site and your poem from 2005 came up. It's often nice to be reminded of these little gems you once created. When you read it over now does it seem like your work or are you stunned by the potency of something like this being in your portfolio. I am always stunned and pleased that these little gems are there. Looking back I can think 'hey, I am a pretty good writer'. Rarely do I cringe at the pieces that have stayed so long in my portfolio.

That said, I will say I enjoyed this... and I didn't realize you had been here on this site so long.

Your poem has a distinct ryming pattern of the first two lines of each stanza rhyming, but the last does not.

I enjoyed your word choices and the images you portrayed.

I took the time to lookup the Redbuds as I was not sure what it looked like. It would be nice to add a notes section with a link to the tree's picture. It would also be nice to have a note regarding the type of poem you crafted. These are things you probably do now.

Having seen the picture of the tree the poem seems that much sweeter than when I first read it. Thank you so much for sharing. I look forward to reading more of you work.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .