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 The Weaponization of DEIB  Open in new Window. [E]
The threads of Diversity, Equity, Inclusion, and Belonging (DEIB)
by tashabrown Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello tashabrown Author Icon,

I am all for this. I know there are a lot of people that preach but don't practice because they really don't see how the word inclusion should broadly define. You aim is in the workplace foremost and makes me think of companies hat operate through a manual and directions from a Human Resources department that finds loopholes in rules. And you say this is more than idea, but I feel getting legislators on board could help. But, there are things government can't regulate.

I find you have solid points here. I think to better serve your argument, include some examples and take time introducing the subject. You can deliver more and probably add some to this to motivate people with your 'call to action'. Knowing who you are trying to reach and in what forums can benefit as well.

I feel you have something in the making that you likely plan to expand upon and maybe implement in a larger context. I worry about a word like "weaponize" because it can cause people to fear aggression or a difficult arena to open up and express their ideas and feelings they might contribute. I see the frustration and emotion in the words you have chosen. I think a majority of people are on your side. People who are against won't change their minds. But, getting the people who believe in this, and there are plenty, just need information. What scenarios where they can deploy, use their voices.

Getting people motivated to act with be setting this editorial up with some very sad truths and offering DEIB as the pronouncement of change. I think if you can lift up people who are passive or who are unaware, you can inspire change. Hopefully, you'll find a forum that can reach out.

Great offering and thank you for sharing and creating awareness. I've also long inclusion in many arenas of life.

Brian
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