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Review #4773838
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 A Mare's Nose Open in new Window. [E]
How else would one describe the most incredible nose in the world?
by Pony Tale Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, Pony Tale! I am reviewing this because I am part of the Anniviersary Reviewing Team. *Smile* Wow! You've been here almost as long as me! Happy 21st Writing.com Anniversary! I hope you have many more. *Heart*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* Ooooooh!!!!!!! This is special. It reminds me of the horse (Chief) my granddaughter used to have. His nose was soooo soft. As I read this poem about a horse's nose, it brought back memories.
         *Bulletg* I loved the entire piece, but the following lines really stood out to me:
whose breath plays
my fingers like thick,
fleshy strings
         *Bulletp* You obviously have a love of horses. My mother-in-law, my granddaughter, my mother, and my sister have this, too. Me? I like them, but I have this anxiety around them because they are so big and powerful. I think I would do well with a small pony (where my feet would almost touch the ground *Rolleyes*) or a donkey. *Bigsmile* I've seen a few wild burros in Arizona and California and have fallen in love with them!


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         I have nothing to suggest.


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         My granddaughter is on the Equestrian team at her school. She leases a horse right now. I love going to her competition and watching! I just wish I wasn't so fearful of those beautiful animals!

         I loved this. Great job!

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Have a great day and...*Quill*
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