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Dear LightinMind Author Icon,

Well, I have to say I loved this with the light rhyme scheme and that need for speed. I liked that you added a note for context. I was caught by the title and stepped in. My brother was a muscle car guy, so kind of different from the German auto to the fastback Ford he renovated.

When you described the sound of the auto, I knew this was not the type of auto I was setting my mind to. His car would gurgle and rock you, with an engine rev so loud you needed ear plugs. He even had an "oh sh*t" handle for the passenger on the ceiling because it could throw you back.

This poem opens with remarks that made me think it could be more than just the car, but a plea to live lift a little, like let your hair down. That depiction was well stated in the first stanza.

The voice in this poem and where it's headed is also a surprise as we see it directed toward the spouse. I can imagine she'd be afraid of that speed. But I also know well built cars that travel that road perform well.

But, it's inferred that there are some things you don't disagree with like green energy, but the plea to not deny the thrill to drive 150...if you could have one thing.

Well stated poem with a note on global concerns.

Brian
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