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Review #4773761
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L'aura del Campo Open in new Window. [13+]
Online journal capturing the moment and the memory of moments. A meadow meditation.
by Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon

Thanks for sharing the link in newsfeed. Did not enter in contest, I believe. I won't judge it on the prompt since I've entered under the same title. Way to many ways to get tripped up on all that was wanted. I think they just like to torture people.

Anyway, I got a clear distinction of contrast between two characters, one older than the other. What is ironic is this is like the perfect mate and yet 'wants more'. Further irony, the age difference. It's hard to know what the heart wants, but maybe its not about the relationship. Time seems to factor, like the 24 years. Another irony, not really a commitment if the speaker doesn't expect to live that long.

With all the showing, I feel that unanswered question, narrative puzzlement. The only thing I could conclude is that the young man will be alone at the end. And the older might want the freedom to live a bit more life before its done.

If I know the speaker, I'd say as an intellectual, is still creating and possibly evolving, but with some sets of ideals. Freedom is fickle. And sometimes, we want the wrong thing because of a life conditioned by making bad choices. It's possible, in place of all those who aren't making one suffer anymore, it's the self that is comfortable with all things contrasting that sunshine.

That's as much as I can think of for the time. But you are always good with dichotomy of two tales mirroring one another. This is more about contrasting two lives.

Brian
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