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 Open Open in new Window. [ASR]
A story poem of when I had open heart surgery.
by Spectre9six Author Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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A raw and metaphoric poem about your experience of open heart surgery. It translates into other experiences and feelings, as many people use this type of analogy to speak about vulnerability and hardship.

The words balance well, with an almost rap-like cadence. I especially like the way you've described the surgical instruments that look so deadly, lad out on the table. I hope you are recovering well.

This almost feels like you had an out of body experience, implying perhaps that you saw parts of the process we don't usually see.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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