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 Mowing Open in new Window. [E]
Everyone's life is beautiful, everyone is so much more deep down.
by rainyplot336 Author Icon
Review of Mowing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

What a beautiful and picturesque vignette, giving us a grand and sweeping vision of the hustle and bustle of a city, the hum and vibrancy of the humanity within, and the spirit of endeavors lying beneath the stones.

I love your way of bringing the scenes to life in fleeting glimpses which encapsulate so much more that one would think. Though this vignette has no particular storyline, no action or dialogue, it still conveys a poetic meaning and is... May I ask why the title is "Mowing?" That doesn't seem to suit the profundity of the words or the city theme.

A word count would be good in the subtitle or at the beginning of the item to let us know what we're getting into. And I strongly encourage the use of three relevant genres to help people find the item when browsing and also to qualify for as many Quill Award nominations as possible. I would suggest "Experience," "Philosophy," or "Drama" or "Emotional" or "Inspirational" or "Cultural."

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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