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Review #4773357
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Promptly 4 and 5 Open in new Window. [13+]
Poems for years 4 and 5 of the Promptly Poetry Challenge.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Beholden!

I’m just finishing up my 10 monthly reviews for the PPC5 members, trying not to be a pest… *Whistle*

You have a knack for painting word pictures… the feel of lazy summer days fading ever so slowly into evening… you’ve engaged all our senses in a lovely conversational way, with sight and smell and sound and temperature blending into the picture. It reminds me of days spent doing yard work as a kid in our acre of land in Tennessee. So much can be learned from nature. I never felt that ants were a nuisance; in fact, we grew an organic garden, albeit ornamental. But “ornamental” is rather a silly word… all plants are beneficial to the wildlife, and we need the butterfly and bee plants for pollination and the balance of nature. It was rather an herb garden… I suppose I digress.

Anyway, this is another great poem. Have you entered Shadows and Light recently? I think this would be an excellent entry. It brought back fond memories and is everything I enjoy about poetry.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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