Hi Tim,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who is alone on a rainy day. I love hearing the rain on the roof. It puts me right to sleep. The rain is good for my garden as well. These are the only things good about rainy days, though. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.