Hi dyxeOri,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with anxiety and sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who has their sense of self esteem. I have always struggled with self esteem issues but have held onto the thought of the people that love and value me in these moments. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.