Hi Deepak Sagar

I'm reviewing your short story titled, "Right Thirst" for the Daily Review. Let's move on with it...


Impression: This is the story of a young deer that learns to act on his desire, face the threat of death but succeed with his life, and courage intact. This deer truly quenched his thirst today. Through this success he can go forward bravely many more times into the crocodile's realm.

What I loved: I loved the imagery of the deer stepping into crocodile terrain to drink a few gulps of water and rejoicing at the end with its reward. Felt real nice to see the deer win so soundly at the end.


What needs work: Nothing needs rework.


Final thoughts: This was a feel good story of quenching not just a physical thirst but motivationally, it encourages others to step out and face life's challenges and win.
When you stay thirsty, you always seek to quench life's thirst.

Very nice job today! I enjoyed reading your work and hope you enjoy the celebration this week!











My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .