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Across the Fence

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Raggedy Ann and Andy meet a new friend…
by Amethyst ❄️ Angel

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Review of Across the Fence

Review by Cubby

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Rated: E

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Greetings, Amethyst ❄️ Angel, I am reviewing this today as a judge for the "Writing 4 Kids Contest " . And you are one of three entries!

First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Followed the prompt & rules Excellent!

First Impression:

This is such a cute story! It was easy to visualize Raggedy Ann and Andy throughout the entire tale. The descriptions of your characters, including the one-eyed elf, were amazing. The dialogue flowed along easily, as did everything.

Favorites:

The elf boy was not much bigger than either of them. His pointed ears twitched nervously as he looked from one to the other with his lone blue eye and clasped his hands.
(I love this visual!)

Final thoughts:

I've read several of your pieces since you've been here and am curious if you've ever been published by a traditional publisher? Do you send your work in? I ask these questions because you are a very gifted writer. If you don't submit your work, you might want to seriously think about it. If you only write for fun, then ignore my suggestion.