Hi Wandering Thoughts,

These are fantastic lyrics. The tone is filled with anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The lyrics are about the confusion and anxiety which color your life. I am hoping that you will find peace in your life. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved these lyrics. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the lyrics a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The lyrics flows very well. They are a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in these lyrics. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.