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 why are you looking at me Open in new Window. [E]
I wrote in high school after a rough patch with my crush who happened to be staring at me
by sapphire kuyeus Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Love is interesting. Ups, and downs. Then, we end up in a situation where something happens, and as a result, we no longer love the other. There are many possibilities, some are worse than others. In this case, sounds like it was pretty bad, to cause you to break up with them. However, good things tend to happen, and perhaps something good will come.

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Looks like an interesting piece to read.

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I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

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