Hi, Once in Ryan David's City ,

I found this remarkable gem of a poem on the Read & Review Page. WOW, WOW, WOW! What a wonderful funny poem. I am not surprised it won several contests. It's hilarious.

7 stanzas with funny remarks to divide them. What a treat.

I read the poem a few times and read it also out loud, it never became dull, it stayed fresh, funny, and extremely amusing!

The best lines? I'd just de-loused the camel, as some snow was on its way. And...Well off I went to wash the cat, with furrowed brow and shin. To name a few, but in a way every line of this verse hit it.

I didn't find any grammar errors, everything was as it should be. Pace, Rhythm, and Rhyme were wonderful! And the content was unexpected.

Thank you for sharing, keep on writing.

WakeUpAndLive~"HoHoHo"

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .