Hi Sue,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the big and small mysteries of life. It is, sometimes, easier to concentrate on the smaller things that happen everyday instead of puzzling out the bigger questions. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a fabulous rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.