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The secret  [E]
A secret buried deep inside my heart forever.
by vaiyshnavi
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi vaiyshnavi,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is sorrow and love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who confused about why they let someone they love go. I am hoping that the speaker finds peace in their future and rebuilds their life. I read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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