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 i wanna make an arthouse film  [E]
for an arthouse crowd
by Chico Mahalo
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

We meet again, this time via the Random Read and Review button. An amusing tongue in cheek dream of a loser with aspirations... (I'm afraid I'm using the same vocabulary I used yesterday...)

We all chuckle and shake our heads at the weird stuff which passes for "artsy" movies, and I know I've puzzled over a few Wikipedia plotlines before giving up on such pointless rabbit holes. As one who guards my cultural inputs for various psychosocial reasons, I don't watch movies at all, actually.

You paint a quick and well-told vignette, and the only thing I would suggest is, again, to choose three relevant genres to help people find your work (though I must say you pop around on my sidebars quite a lot regardless...)

The opening lines feel almost like it's going to be a rambunctious sort of poem, which would be a fun way to reshape this if you were interested.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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