Hi R.S.V.R.,

This is a fantastic chapter. The chapter opens with a very good question posed by Catalina. The reader is anxious to know the answer and will read on to find out. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. The suspense of wondering if the women will find a way to break into the building pulls the reader along to the end of the chapter. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.